'least developed areas of Pakistan' sop of 250 words. its for semester exchange prog

My outlook on life, can be determined by how I feel about people and diversity, which all came from where I grew up.I belongs to gigilt, which is enriched with natural resources and perhaps, the most spectacular region of Pakistan in terms of its geography and scenic beauty. but still GB is one of the least developed areas of Pakistan because of sectarianism,in adequate developmental policies & lack of infrastructure.

I started to involve in community services very early in my life because I always wanted to be a part of change in socio economic and socio political status of the region. That's why I choose social science as my field of studies in the university as It allows me to understand the social structures and regional political affairs of the region. I believe that social sciences will assist me to pursue my goals of social development in Gilgit Baltistan.

The US is a highly pluralistic society despite of having deep cultural, ethnical and religious diversifications. being a student of social sciences I am very interested to learn about the US society, its culture,and the democratic system of US. this scholarships not only allows me to have a close view of American society but also provides me an opportunity to study in one of of best education system in the world. this will enhance my personal as well as academic skills which will benefit my me in my studies in Pakistan after coming back to my country.

My outlook on life, ---no comma here--- can be determined by how I feel about people and diversity, which all came from where I grew up.---Always leave a space between sentences.

I belongs to Gigilt , which is enriched with natural resources and perhaps, the most spectacular region of Pakistan in terms of its geography and scenic beauty.

But still GB is one of the least developed areas of Pakistan because of sectarianism,in adequate developmental policies & lack of infrastructure.---Always leave a space after each comma, also.

I started to involve ---became involved in community services very early in my life because I always wanted to be a part of change in socio economic and socio political status of the region.

That's why I choose social science as my field of studies in the university, as It allows me to understand ...

Being a student of social sciences, I am very interested to learnin learning about the US society, its culture...

Be sure to start each new sentence with a capital letter!
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