Hi, David. I'll help you with your essay:-----------------------
I grew up with parents that encouraged me to strive for the best and not settle for anything else.
I grew up with parents
thatwho encouraged me to strive for the best and not settle for anything else.
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My father was always telling me about his experiences in South Korea with the army.
My father
was always
tellingtalkedme about his experiences in South Korea with the army.
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He showed me that the military is a great place to start out one's adult life.
He showed me that the military is a great place to start
out one's adult life.
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When I was younger, I went on camping trips with the Cub Scouts and when I was old enough, I became a Boy Scout.
When I was younger, I went on camping trips with the Cub Scouts
;and when I was old enough, I became a Boy Scout.
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I became a Patrol Leader and took a course called National Youth Leadership Training, which taught me how to effectively lead and teach.
I became a Patrol Leader and took a course called National Youth Leadership Training
,;whichthis taught me how to effectively lead and teach.
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I hope that helps you some :)