I learn Korea and Korean language intensively, from now on - essay for KGSP

Hi, i will apply KGSP scholarship. This is my study plan. Please give your feedback and comments.

Study plans to improve foreign languages(Korean, English, etc) required for taking a bachelor's degree course
BEFORE and AFTER you come to Korea.

Study Plan about Language for KGSP

English is not my first language and I'm not fluent in English too. It might make me difficult to adaptation easily in another country despite the country not use English, but I think English always be a bridge to communicated. So, I improve my English first though. Now, I'm more seriously to learn English than before. I inured my self to speak English. I start speak English in my home to make me more relax and confident. Also, I take a course to correct my grammar and feel confindent to speak English in outside. It's make good to often speak English confindently. I download some mobile application and read book in English to add my vocab and I make dictionary by my self. And for my grammar, be side learn at course, I learn from internet by my self like do toefl practice. I am not yet do a real toefl test because the fee is expensive and my English not very well. So, for tested my English, special grammar and understanding text. I do PTESOL test that more cheap than real toefl. And finally, I got not bad score. I plan to take a real toefl test at November or desember in this year. I will fluent in English before I go to korea. Because, if I'm not fluent in English maybe I'm in trouble to learn korean.

But, I also learn korea from now. Actually, I had learnt korean but not seriously. I just memorize hangul and some words. Now, I memorize hangul again, add vocab and learn korean grammar. Again, I learn from mobile application. I think mobile application is usefull because it easy, flexible, and fun. I watching some variety show to familiarize korean to me.

In my first year in korean language school, I plan to speak korean over and over. I try to not speak Indonesian or English. It's hard but I must do it. It can help me to understand korean language quickly. Like I learn English, I will make dictionary by my self, because write something by my self really helpful. I can easily to memorize it. I plan to write diary with hangul. Also, I plan to read korean novel or paper news, to accustomed me to write and read hangul. I will really hard to get level 5 TOPIK.

Nada, this is not a serious academic language development plan. Your presentation looks more like you are fooling around with your friends and relatives rather than addressing the all powerful KGSP reviewer. There is a clear lack of academic tone and presentation in your essay. You do not have a clear language study plan that can be taken seriously before and after you arrive in Korea. You cannot say you will develop one language then, upon arrival in Korea, stop developing your skills in one language in order to favor the other. You need to present a balanced language development plan for both English and Hangul. You can start by saying that you will enroll in English and Hangul tutorial classes either online or physically so that you can begin to build a strong language foundation for yourself upon your arrival in Korea. Indicate plans as to how you will continue to develop both language skills either through enrollment in more language classes or interaction with people who speak one or both languages so that you can continue to polish your skills outside of the academic setting. Your plans to learn via a mobile app should not even be presented in this essay because that is too informal a method of learning. The reviewer is asking you to present formal academic learning plans in this instance. Take the presentation seriously and use an academic presentation instead of this informal and hodge podge of presentation that you have. Do not use this essay. It is not impressive and will not help your application at all.

Ok, i will make another study plan. Thank's for your advice.

Nada, we have some destination country ! :)
but, if you write the study plan based on KGSP Guidline, it will be good.
there is 2 kind of information that you have to write :
1. Goal of study, title or subject of research, and detailed study plan
2. Future plan in Korea or another country after study in Korea

@SeilaKey I hope we can meet in korea :) i just knew that, thank you for your advice :)