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Story: Meet Me 'You Know Where', Reading an unknown letter


stranger4ever 8 / 29  
Jun 21, 2010   #1
Hi, I have always loved writting stories and dream about puplishing them in a book and getting mine on the best selling books shelf. So I decided to see how people reacct to my stories by letting you read the first chapter from my new story. The story is called PS:Meet Me 'You Know Where'

Chapter one: Reading an unknown letter

Sindy, a twenty-five years old girl who works as a writer, was once walking on the maple street in Russia. She was very angry and kept on thinking; ( How can an adept writer like her has not been able to write one page on her new book the is dwed to be puplished after three months)? While walking, she found an old house that seemed to be empty just like her mind.As she sat on the stairs of that house, teardrops from her eyes started falling on the ground just like the rain that falls on a rainy day. Suddenly, the strong wind blew a paper on her face. Sindy removed the paper from her face and was a bought to to tear the paper into dozens of peices out of her anger, but she decided to read it instead. It was a letter, she started reading out loud:

4-6-1989
Dear Adam,

I can noy take it anymore, to those people who murdered my family forced me to be their maid, or to be more precise, their slave, because if I didn't, they were going to kill the last person alive in my family, my little sister . Yesterday I heard them talking about killing her, so i decided to put her in her basket a put the basket in the lake, even if she drowned, it is more mercifull than being murdered on those craetures hands. I am not aloud to speak toanyone, the letters you have recieved from me was written during midnight when everyone is sleeping. I am planning to run away and accept your invetation of comming to live with you and your family.

With love,

Sandra
P.S: Meet me tomorrow' you know where'.

Sindy folded the letter and started wondering about what happened to thet girl, Sandra's words touched her heart deeply. The, she realized that she can write in her new book about sandra, but she was curious to know more about what happended to her. So, she decided to search for the other letters Sandra wrote befor this one. Sindy thought for a second, the wind was blowing north , so if I walked south, I may find the rest of the letters, a clue , or even nothing. After ten minutes of walking, she found that the maple street splits into three pathways. The first leads to a long lake, the second path leads to an old farm, and the third path leads to midtown . She remebered that when the letter covered her face, it was damp and had something green on it. Sindy figured out that the letter came from the first path ,and started walking,more like running toward the lake.
Nesreen 15 / 41  
Jun 21, 2010   #2
Wow... I really like your story and I am really curious to know the rest of this story :-)
OP stranger4ever 8 / 29  
Jun 21, 2010   #3
really, thanks alot, can i be a writer in the future
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Jun 23, 2010   #4
Sindy, a twenty-five year-old girl who works

I cannot take it anymore...

This took me into that world a little bit, even though you wrote only a small amount of material. I like the idea for this story and the fact that the main character is a writer. Do you already know what will happen and how it will end, or will you find out the ending as you write?

:-)
OP stranger4ever 8 / 29  
Jun 23, 2010   #5
I got the rest of the story all in my mind, but as I write, I get more ideas to add.But I have one question, when u said: I cannot take it anymore..., it just seemed that u where bored or something, am i right?Plzzz reply, hope u really liked the idea.Thanks for reading.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Jun 24, 2010   #6
I'M SORRY! :-) No, it's interesting, and I'll read more if you post more.

I was correcting a mistake:
I cannot take it anymore, to those people who murdered my...

ha ha, sorry for the confusion...


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