, type at least ten times for every incorrect sentences that had been corrected.
Yes, and in addition to that, you should speak the sentence aloud. That is how to immerse yourself in the correct grammar.
I am so surprised that you did not score well.
Being inclined to bark, whine, have embarrassing accidents, and noisily lick themselves,
students should not bring their dogs to class. dogs should not be brought to class.---I changed it so that "dogs" is the subject of the sentence. Is that what you had in mind?
This is a well-constructed sentence:
Angry with my failures, last month I changed my job from a full-time to a part-time just to read these crazy English grammar books.
I added "books" because "these" makes it plural.
Or you could do this:
Angry with my failures, last month I changed my job from a full-time to a part-time just to read this crazy English grammar.
Hey, to be honest, the way you write has fewer errors than most people... even people who grew up speaking English.
What is this test you failed 39 times?