About my 1st story book: percy jackson and lighting thief

When i was a kindergarden kid, my english was tough and smooth, i learn a lot of vocabulary which my teacher teaches.Although malay is easier than english, i would like to read english book because my malay is worse than english.After a few year, i did not look for any other english storybook because i had became very lazy such like a worm. But now, this is my last year for wear school uniform to school to study, i need to improve my english because my grammar is bad and i am writing this essay.

My 1st story book that i buy myself is percy jackson and lighting thief.Why i will buy this book? Because i had watched this movie last time, this movie is awesome.

correct my mistake...

The first story book that i bought myself is Percy Jackson and lighting thief. Why did I buy this book? Because I had watched this movie last time and this movie is awesome.

Note: "Tough and smooth" are two words that shouldn't be put together.

Nice!! Thanks so much Annika!
Okay, Edward, here is your homework: Type the essay again in the post below when you have time. Speak each sentence aloud after you type it. Type sentences like a meditation.

I like this awesome poetry: "very lazy such like a worm."

:-) Let's keep practicing together!