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"Weekend will pass as usual" - essay about how i spend my week off.


sooriyan 1 / 1  
Jul 5, 2011   #1
I always wait eagerly to enjoy my weekoff. Usually my weekoff falls on sunday. I use to wake up quite late in the morning, After finishing my morning duties I take a little physical exersice . After taking exersice I use to wash my clothes. After breakfast my friends and I wil go for a movie or to some picnic spot nearby . Then we use to go for our favourite restaurant to eat our lunch. By the time we reach our room it wil be around 3.30pm.

Finally after a little rest, watching a movie and chatting with my friends. I will continue my favourite novel where I paused last week.

My weekend will pass as usual working around room, going to movie and chatting with my friends. This routine will continue untill a significant change in my life occurs. Who knows, one day I will be rich and travel the world and relax around the beaches on weekend with my friends. Untill then I am okay with it as it is.
Scientiana 12 / 43 10  
Jul 5, 2011   #2
"Used to" is used to show the action that happen regularly in the past and now it doesn't happen.
OP sooriyan 1 / 1  
Jul 6, 2011   #3
Hi Annika,

Thank you very much for your fabulous feedback and guideance. It helps me to develope my writing skill.

Thanks and Regards,
Ravi Perumal
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Jul 7, 2011   #4
Look, you capitalized a word after a comma:
I always wake up quite late in the morning, After finishing my morning duties, I take a little physical exercise. -----That comma should be a period.

I always wake up quite late in the morning. After finishing my morning duties, I take do a little physical exercise.

After taking exercising, I usually wash my clothes.

This is good description, but it is not very interesting! Can you include some UNEXPECTED remark that catches the reader's attention?


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