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Greece - which country would you visit if you have 2 weeks free time?


pooya p 1 / -  
Aug 12, 2011   #1
There are many countries which I have them in my mind to visit them. Enjoying free time and relaxing are the factors that impress a person to see a foreign country.so if I have a chance to become free for two weeks I will go to see Greece. Greece is my first priority to visit it due to some reasons. I love it's climate and visual places.

The most immediate and major effect of selecting Greece is the climate that it has. There are three fantastic major climate in Greece but I prefer It's mediterranean climate. Greece primarily has mediterranean climate, featuring mild, wet winters which occurs at all coastal locations. So It's mediterranean climate makes the country to become one of the high rank of healthy countries.I have lived in a town whose weather is dirty,so I want to seek countries like Greece to breath in a fresh air.

One more matter which has great impact on my opinion to choose Greece is visual places that it has. where ever I travel to, I eager to see It's historical locations in order to understand what culture do the people have in that country.for an elucidation,when you go in Acropolis of Athens you immediately find out how wealthy and past culture they have.in addition there are many Islands in Greece which are the best in the world.to prove this, In 2011 santorini was voted as ''the world's best Island'' in travel magazine that published in USA.

In conclusion, I think I have enough reasons to travel abroad to see Greece that is my dreaming country if I have two weeks free time.
Emmawyy - / 2  
Aug 12, 2011   #2
There are many countries which I have them in my mind to visit them I have in my mind to vist. Enjoying free time and relaxing being relaxed are the main factors that impress a person to see a foreign country, so if I have had a chance to become free for two weeks have two days off, I will would go to see Greece. Greece is my first priority to visitVisiting Greece is my first priority due to some reasons: I love it's climate and visual places.

Hope it will help u.
ps I really don't know what visual places mean.
ghafarimahsa 15 / 41  
Aug 14, 2011   #3
country, so if I had a chance to be free for two weeks I will travel to Greece
Greece is my first priority to visit it ,due to some reasons

Greece primarily has aM editerranean climate

healthiest countries ( so nice expression )

I have lived in a town whose weather is dirty... It is better to say contaminated air

Pooya, after full stop add space and start your new sentense with a capital letter : do the people have in that country.forcountry. For an elucidation,when

In 2011 Santorini was voted

Doctor Pooya, I hope you will be free enough to travel to Greece.
GOOOOOOOOD LUCK,


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