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'I want to be a doctor in the future' - Describe your short and long-term goals


xinxin 3 / 1  
Jan 26, 2012   #1
Please check if there is any grammar errors, run-on. Please give me any advise to improve this essay! Thank you so much in advance!=)
Describe your short and long-term goals and how you plan to accomplish them. (1000)

Life has no meaning without goals. I set up my life goals regularly and plan to accomplish them step-by-step. My current short-term goal is to graduate from high school with high grades and to learn as much as I can so I will be prepared for college. It will not be that difficult to reach if I am responsible to my academic courses and put in the required effort before a test to show what I learned. Along with that, I am also working towards my scholarships so I can afford my education. By accomplishing these short term goals, I will finish the first step that is going to reach my dream, which is to become a doctor. There are people who are suffering from disease in developing countries. Another goal I want to achieve with degree is to help these people get better health conditions. In order to accomplish that, I will engage more volunteer opportunities at local hospitals to gain experience about how to take care of people and what to expect in the future.
saurabh93 11 / 94  
Jan 26, 2012   #2
Be more specific in your response. I think this paragraph is a little too general and unoriginal. But I don't see problem with grammar.

Can you look at mine? Thanks!!
OP xinxin 3 / 1  
Jan 26, 2012   #3
--yes of cause I will read your essay!
this is a 1000 characters paragraph. I cannot write it longer.

--Thank you for your help, Jennifer!


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