Where is the picture? Readers will share thoughtful feedback if you include the picture of the graph. Also, you should write IELTS task 1, including the full prompt.
Yes, you need to upload the image. Use the "Attach file(s)" feature in the Message Block to upload your image :)
The bar chart
delineatespresents the
amount of sales of silver goods for Meteor Products Ltd and Mark Jones Ltd for the
following year(you need to specify the period here), andwhile the pie chart presents an overview of the predicted market share at the end of
the coming year. ?????
Include an Overview in between the Introduction and the Detail Body paras. The Overview should explain the major trends very briefly. It should not contain details that you talk about in the Detail body paras.