Hi SHanafi, let me try to ask you some questions, give suggestions and comments.
Grammatical IssuesWhile it is true for some major reasons
if I do not mistaken, I have commented this preposition in your previous writing but why you repeat the mistake? have you checked your dictionary to make sure the preposition?. I am afraid I am wrong as you reject my suggestion.
it should be :
toshe is in powerful oppositionin against
it should be :
togovernment who arrest her in unfair way in that era,
I know that you want to use adjective clause subject correctly; you, even though, should re-write your sentence to make it easy to follow your flow.
so my suggestion is :
government that arrests her i unfair way in the era,they way of leading depict violence and hostility
it should be
depicts or depictedMargaret Thatcher who ordered British Navy to conquer Falkland Island from Argentina is stance stronger as an obvious example
I am afraid that this sentence is not easy to read. (your flow sentence)He leads in complex struggle
why you put a preposition "in" in such a sentence ?, I am afraid that it is not collocate with your verb. I suggest you to check your advance dictionary, and let me know if I am wrong.
many victims died and the protest from world peace-lover around the world raised
do not you think that you should put a coma in this sentence?
inspirationin leading with peace
in is not collocate with inspiration.
it should be =
forresistance from foreign helps
my suggestion =>
resistance of foreignNobel awardee and alsobecome the symbol of peace
do not you think that it is redundant idea? /
becomes (subject verb agreement)
I would like to discuss about flows and ideas in the next comment :)
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