Here are my thoughts on your essay:Nowadays, majority of children use computers for amusement.
Nowadays,
the majority of children use computers for amusement.
Some of people consider that as one way to enjoy their children while the other try to avert them the negative effects of long hours using of this machine.
Some
of people consider
that as one waythem astools forto enjoy their children
to use to to entertain themselves, while
the other try to avert them theothers view themnegative effects of long hours using of this machinenegatively .
I partially agree with speaker's opinion because that depends on how the family manipulates this issue.
I partially agree with
speaker'sstated opinion
that too much computer time can be a bad thing. In my opinion, the effect the computer has on a childbecause that depends on how the family
manipulatesaddresses this issue.
First, accessing computers is an efficient way to let our children amusing themselves instead of playing with rude friends or acquaintances in their neighborhood.
First, accessing computers is an efficient way to let ourIt is important to ensure that children
use computers to have wholesome fun, rather thanamusing themselves instead of playingusing them to interact with rude
friends or acquaintances in their neighborhoodpeople .
For example, I live in rural place in Palestine where there are some of an impolite children that hurt and influence my children negatively.
My own children began communicating with impolite children over the internet, and I saw firsthand how that experience negatively affected them.For example, I live in rural place in Palestine where there are some of an impolite children that hurt and influence my children negatively.I hope that helps you some!