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Task 1 IELTS - Level of satisfying in the shops and restaurants


irfan727 49 / 68 29  
Oct 6, 2015   #1
The tables and pie chart reveal the number of people who are determined by gender about the level of satisfying in the survey of a novel shopping area in Auckland, New Zealand. Overall, the majority of citizens are satisfied with shops and restaurants which is built. While, the total number of inhabitants who satisfied with the design more over a half of total percentages.

First, based on the table, the aggregate of shoppers peak at 45 males and only different 10 people if compare with female in the same category or in other word satisfied. Even though the proportion of men who are very satisfied solely 17 persons, this is too far if it compared with the women. That is exactly double numbers in 34 females.

Furthermore, in the restaurants, the great deal of shoppers is satisfied. This is proved with the rate of male at 55 and female in 32. This is evidence that has a similar pattern between shops and restaurants. Whereas the proportion of shoppers who are very satisfied almost same approximately in 25 people.

Regarding the design, a wide range of number are held by satisfied category which is followed by very satisfied group with 17% and others just little around a tenth.



irhame 52 / 50 25  
Oct 6, 2015   #2
Furthermore, in the restaurants, the great deal of shoppers is satisfied. This is proved with the rate of male at 55% and female in 32% . This is evidence that has a similar pattern between shops and restaurants. Whereas, the proportion of shoppers who are very satisfied almost same approximately in 25 peoplepercent .


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