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The picture of Fairmont Island in the eyes of regular visitors.


daveandrei 14 / 8 5  
Nov 20, 2015   #1
IELTS Task 1: The Survey of The Most Usual Advantages and Disadvantages of Fairmont Island

The two of pie chart depict the survey of the most usual advantages and disadvantages of Fairmont Island by the traveller opinion. At first glance, it is evident that the most usual advantage comes from the resident who lives there and the most usual disadvantage was gained by high expense of living.

The most general advantages from Fairmont Island tourism place which was observed by visitors consisted of the four selections: the citizens, the panorama, a great accommodation and culture. It can be seen that the inhabitants obtain 40 percent. The scenery acquires the second most choice as the Fairmont Island advantages at 37%. The last of tourist selection is a fine accommodation only 11 percent.

There are four the most general disadvantages such as a weather, an expensive expense for a living, an entertainment and a food quality. An expensive cost for a living was chosen to be the most usual disadvantages at 45%. However, a food quality became the lowest choice only 5 percent.

Ultimately, it was a clear selection that people are really keen on having a great accommodation but they did not like to be offered a high expense for a living.



irhame 52 / 50 25  
Nov 21, 2015   #2
The two of pie chart depict the survey of ...

A comparison of percentage of the most common benefits and breakdowns of Fairmont Island as per to as survey of visitors, this information is illustrated in two pie charts. Overall, while the island has worse food quality, such island receives more advantages from culture.

There are four categories which are being the most general disadvantages. they aresuch as a weather, an expensive expense for a living,and an entertainment and a food quality.

HoweverIn contrast , athe food quality became the lowest choice at only 5 percent.


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