Independence could be something just in your thoughts, or in you opinion, your views, or the way you are living or with whom you are living.
No need to give this information about independence.
. I have a mixed opinion on this. In order to support my answer please read below.
mixed opinion ? please read below ?
Adolescence is a stage where a person wants to take their own decisions.
You should start with connectors or transitional words like; first of .....Then write down a supportive reason .....then start with...
In my view, if a young adult is mature enough to take his decisions and can take care of himself then its good to live alone.
In the body, you have to give your personal opinion.........