The students just study in their nation and are rarely to abroad study because of many reasons in the past.
Students in past were more likely to study in their own countries.
But for now, they have more chances for studying in another country.
More students today prefer studying overseas
But there are so many benefits even drawbacks of abroad study
Mention the drawbacks clearly exactly upfront, so you help reader understand what will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
it has also several advantages.
Again, this sentences does not bring much help as it sounds too vague
In this paragraph, i will explain about disadvantages of abroad study.
This is a rough start. When it comes to topic sentence, you simply paraphrase what is in the thesis statement.
I heard from the leader of LPDP, Mr Abdul Kahar said one of the awardee in Canada
IELTS is an international exam, so you need to present current issues within international scale rather thank talking about the local one.
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