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Common people accept the best way to get information is Internet
The Internet as the source of the information is the latest communication tool.
on the other hand, it is not only route of communication.
Although this is true to some extent, such a tool opens up more opportunities for those who deal with.
In my perspective, Internet had been supplied preponderance of information to connectedly people.
In my opinion, the Internet has successfully changed the way people communicate.
Yet, it is give to people rampant information and people must be selective to choose an information.
However, people should be wiser to use this technology as the reliability of its information cannot be justified.
Well, it seems that you are trying to use BIG WORDS in this session. For your information, IELTS is not a vocabulary test, so using BIG WORDS will NOT help you score higher. Use plain English is always better, since this language brings clarity.
Hope this helps :D