The climate crisis in United States - significant increase of heat

Ted Talks 1 - Al Gore - a climate crisis

Ted Talks Summary:

There had been a climate crisis in United States where there was a significant increase in U.S heat from 31 degrees Fahrenheit to 39.5 degrees Fahrenheit. Abstractly, the business sector in the United States contributed from years to years that show a significantly increase the emissions until 2060. The man suggested us to contribute to reduce this United States emission contribution by reducing emission from your home energy, from your car, become a eco-friendly consumer, try to reduce the use of carbon dioxide production machines and use of carbon calculator, campaign to the government so that it becomes the system where the CEO of companies have obligation to maximize the profit through carbonless emission, raise awereness through community by promoting to each other about the essential thing of global warning. Therefore, those things can helpful to reduce the emission before the year of 2060.

Hi,I thought your writing is comprehensive enough but it will be better if you put the information about the experts talking and sources.

...there was a significant increase in U.Sheat from 31 degrees Fahrenheit ...
>>>> i suggest to replace "heat" with "temperature"; plus, you don't need to mention "the US" here (redundancy)

... the business sector in the United States contributed from years to years that ...
>>>>i attempt to write it, be careful of collocation (contribute+to) "...it is predicted that business sector in the US will contribute immensely to this deteriorating emission until 2060."

The man suggested us to contribute to,......about the essential thing of global warning.
>>>you need to simplify this sentence
>>>The man... (who is he? you haven't mentioned any name before); you should write it in third-person point of view (no "you")

Therefore, those things can be helpful to reduce the ...
>>>>i suggest to replace "things" with "measures"