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Summary Article: Revisiting globalization of English


ibal28 20 / 30 5  
Sep 21, 2016   #1
We have already known two kinds of English language, the first is American English and the second is British English. This issue becomes crucial since courses and some of the foreign language education mushroomed in our country. Unfortunately, Indonesian learners will fail to speak as well because it is too hard caused by English are not our mother tongue. There are so many problems why this issue began: firstly we did not practice every day as our mother language and Indonesian reportedly have a different length of a tongue from the other people in UK or US for sure.

Nowadays, English language disrupted by globalization. This is affected our information and technology change rapidly. Some of the social networking brings us to an easy understanding by the cutting-edge technology. This problem changed people lifestyle to use English language every day.

So, how should we learn English now?
Using American or British English no longer become the hard problem for us since the globalization affected our lifestyle. With the available resources for learning English, this can improve our capability to utilize it. But the big problem is our environment and cultures sometimes give the obstacle to learning it.
Ifan21 22 / 24 2  
Sep 22, 2016   #2
Hallo Ibal28
It is such a great Essay, These following are corrections to make it even better :

... two kinds of English language, the first is American (...) British English (Instead of using detail (first and second) i suggest you to change it into "Both are American and British English" ).

... of the foreign language (Languages ) education mushroomed ...
Unfortunately, Indonesian learners will fail to speak as well because it is ... (Simplify this complicated sentence by saying "Being second language, English will hard to be spoken well by Indonesian Learners " ). There are so many problems (two major factors ) why this issue began namely : firstly we did not practice every day as our mother language (Avoid in using word repeatedly) and Indonesian reportedly ...

Thanks and Good Luck
Best Regard
Ifan21


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