IELTS Summary Task : Nurse Migration
Today, the health care systems world are threatens by nurse migration. This migration are caused by vary and complex problems. Higher salaries and better quality of life are some reasons why nurses moving from native country to wealthier countries. In some region especially developing nations such as South Asia and Latin America, the primarily reason for the shortage is nurse working abroad to meet demand needs in Europe and North America. The other case occurred in Philippines. They send thousands nurse working abroad and got income one billion dollar annually. The consequences of those policy is the Philippines feel the effects of the nursing shortage. Furthermore, the side effect of nurse migration is their leaving of health care up to assistant nurses, who have rudimentary training. Meanwhile, developed countries invest and focus on retaining and rewarding nurses, both financially and high-quality working conditions
... care systems world are threatens (threaten ) by nurse migration. This
migration (migrations ) are caused by vary (various ) and complex problems.
... as South Asia and Latin America, the primarily (primary ) reason for the shortage is nurse working
abroad to meet demand needs (demands ) in Europe and North America.
... nurse working abroad and got income (about ) one billion dollar annually. The consequences of those policy is (that ) the
-Philippines feel the effects -(result ) of the nursing shortage (for Philippines) .
Today, the health care systems world are threatens threatened by nurse migration.
This migration are is caused by vary ...
In some region regions especially (...) Latin America, the primarily primary reason
They send have sent thousands nurse nurses working abroad ...
Hi Dioba,
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... of nurse migration is their leaving of they leave on their health care up to assistant ...
Hopefully it helps.
Hey Dioba..
It is such a great essay .
These following correction are subjected to your essay :
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... why nurses moving from nativetheir country to wealthier countries.
... abroad to meet demand needsrequirement in Europe and North America. The other cases occurred in Philippines ()it is not a sentece just consist of Subbejec Past participle (V-ed forma without to be are not verb but rather adj) . They send thousands nurses working abroad and ...
The consequences of those policyiesis are the Philippines feel ...
Furthermore, the side effect (spesify bad/good) of nurse migration is their ...
Note:
Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, the main idea of sentece, how and how to create the complex sentence correctly
Thanks
Best regard
Ifan
