The line graph shows the comparison ot the car theft during 1990 and 1999 in Great Britain ,Swedan,France and Canada.Overall,the most popular of the four countries of amounts car theft for the majority of the 9-year period were in Great Britain.as we can see,the amounts of car theft wiil be predicted to go up a peak in Swedan by the consecutive year,a while the amounts of the car theft were opposed to in others.bacause,the exception of swedan's car were fluctuated considerably.the amounts of car theft will increase together during two years between 1993 and 1995.The highest significant rise was in Swedan where there were from 5 to around 15 between 1990 and 1990.Between 1995 and 1999 had plummeted from around 8 to 5 per 1000 vehicles .Except,in Swedan,Canada and Great Britain will be predicted to rise and the great britain is also as same as in France with the lower one year between 1995 and 1996
Since there is no figure that you showed to this thread so I'll try to give tou suggestions by several mistakes on your writing not your idea.
The line graph shows the comparison otof (misspellings) the number ofcar theftstolen cars (paraphrase of car theft) during 1990 and 1999 in Great Britain ,Swedan,France and Canada.several countries around Europe (to reduce repetition which has already written in the question).
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The line graph shows the comparison otof the number of car theft during 1990 and 1999 in Great Britain ,SwedanSweden ,France and Canada.
==> please pay attention for misspelling words, sometimes it betters if to check the word again in dictionary before you post it.
Overall(to introduce concluding comments you can use: To conclude, In conclusion, In brief, All in all, and To sum up)it can be seen that , the most popular of the four countries of amountsthe highest amounts of car theft for the majority of the 9-yearover the period were in Great Britain.
aA s we can see, the amounts of car theft wiilwill[misspelling] .... in SwedanSweden by .....
bacauseBecause ,the exception of swedan's Sweden car were fluctuated considerably (you have attempted to use the intransitive verb 'fluctuated considerably' in a passive voice construction) .
==> you have to concern about misspelling words and capitalized in front of a sentence.
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