Kevin Breel, is a person who suffering depression about 6 years. He said that many people have a misconception about depression, depression is not about sad about didn't get a job which is a natural emotion. The real depression is being sad when everything seems to be alright. And every 30 second someone commits suicide because of depression.
Many people do not care about people who suffering mental illness instead of physical disease. And depression is not a kind of disease which is cured and gain absolutely health, you must spend many years to deal with depression and it is not easy. Many people think depression are cured by itself because of misconception about depression and ironically, depression is the most common mental problem but the least discussed. The first thing that people can do about depression is to vanish the silence and intolerance.
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Hi Yonathan,
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And every 30 secondS someone commits suicide ...
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... not a kind of disease which iscan be cured and gain absolutely ...
... misconception about depression. and Ironically, depression is (...) but the least to be discussed.
... people can do about depression is to vanishby demolishing the silence and intolerance.
Hopefully it helps.
Hi Yonathan
Here some suggestions for your writing
Kevin Breel, is a person who ... (you do not need to add comma)
not about sad about didn't get a job of being an unemployee ...
to be alright. ,and every 30 seconds someone commits ...
depression are is cured by itself
PS : Improve your understanding about tenses
arrange your sentences well since your summary above is still confusing
Best Regard
Hi Jojo,
Here some suggestions for you.
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depression is not about sadness,it isabout didn't get a job, and thiswhich is a natural emotion.
AndIn every 30 second ...
And depression is not a kind of disease which isbe cured andgainto getabsolutely health,...
Good luck
