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I correct how much I can. There were spelling mistakes.Also some places you can use synonyms.
Additionally .You haven't disagreed anywhere on the paragraph. You have to put another side as well.I believe you have to present both views first and in conclusion your views on it.
correction of spelling mistake and verbs and few synonyms. I have scored 6 in writing and also finding ways to increase to 7 and I found this site useful.
... In fact, to get a space in the city.
reasons
closely linked to this issue...
Before explaining my suggestion, l propose a wider range of opinion on the subject matter.
... and having
the livelihood in the big cities.
... thought of a solution need
ed to deal with as so many ...
... needs a great
er degree of help from the government.
... for the dwellers, it is very beneficial to solve the housing shortcoming. As well as transfer student halls, factories, ...
In addition, increasing the rent by the house owners should be regulated.