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Qualities of a good person - faithful, responsible, kind, helpful...


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Feb 23, 2018   #1

What It Actually Means to Be a Good Person



What do the words good person mean to you? There are many different kinds of people around the world. Some are friendly and some are confident. However, it is very hard to look for someone that we can identify as a good person. In my opinion, there are several personalities of people, but two important qualities are being faithful and being kind.

One of the greatest qualities a good person need is being faithful. First and foremost, a trustworthy person is someone we can count on no matter what. For example, a good person is a person with whom you can talk to and trust with your secrets, they won't open their mouth just for fun of it because they respect you. Furthermore, a trustworthy person will never lie to each other. Another point of being a faithful person is responsible. For instance, as a responsible member of the family, they will take care of whenever they go far away will always worry for the family members. Namely, with a friend relationship, a good person will never penny wise pound foolish, keep a promise, Apologize when you've made a mistake.

Being a kind person is another necessary quality of a good person. Firstly, a good person is someone who has a warm heart. For instance, he or she will give love to people around by they share their couple with virtuous and kind actions such as doing charity, donate money to poor people or taking care of old people in care homes. Moreover, becoming a volunteer can help community life is improved by aiding others and helping hands like joining green summer program. Secondly, caring for each other is a way to build a good character too. For example, when your friend or your family are in a bad situation, a good person can give useful advice to them to help them solve the problem. Namely, Help your friends deal with their struggles and support emotion when they are in bad mood.
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Feb 23, 2018   #2
Phuong, if you are writing this essay only as a part of your English vocabulary development, then you have done a good job. If you wrote this essay in order to practice your English flow of thought and sentence presentations, then this is also an acceptable paper. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing that would affect the clarity of your presentation nor would it impede the understanding of the reader. The essay shows that you have taken great care in thinking about what you wish to say and how you wish to say it. You have proven to have the ability to explain yourself quite well in the language. Your skills, based upon this essay, should be considered intermediate at best. I am not sure if there is anything specific you want me to comment on or critique which is why my review is based on the general presentation of the essay. I hope it helps.


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