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Posts by Nguyen Ngoc Huon
Name: Nguyen Ngoc Huong
Joined: Feb 18, 2019
Last Post: Apr 17, 2020
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From: Viet Nam
School: Vu kiet

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Nguyen Ngoc Huon   
Jan 5, 2020
Writing Feedback / Overpopulation in urban areas has led to some serious problems. Identify some problems and solutions [3]

People flocking to metropolitan regions



That people are increasingly flocking to metropolitan regions in search of appealing opportunities has driven urban areas to overpopulated zones. This trend is currently posing several distressful problems which should be identified and intervened by both goverments and individuals with specific measures.

The most noticeable issue is environmental damage. As human population keeps accelerating, exhaustible natural resources continue to drop sharply. In fact, people recklessly chop down forests for wood to cater for the housing demands of a large population. Consequently, loss of trees leads to more floods which would be an obstacle for human day-to-day work. Furthermore, citizens have to face up with increased emergence of new epidemics and pandemics. Poor living conditions as well as inadequate healthcare are the conveniences for bacteria's growth and new dangerous diseases appear from then, namely cholera or respiratory infections.

It is crucial that radical solutions be formulated to combat the aforementioned problems. Firstly, local authority should adopt harsher punishments for ones that deliberately do illegal logging activities. With tight policies, forests will be properly managed and protected from loggers. Another possibility is to encourage others to keep people's accommodation hygienic and make healthcare services accessible for even impoverished households. Typically, an infant definitely needs to receive sufficient vaccines to be resistant to several diseases.

All in all, it is obvious that fast growing population in big cities in the world today has so far contributed to burning issues to society. Tough regulations together with healthcare services promotion are what governors and citizens can do to prevent overpopulation.
Nguyen Ngoc Huon   
Apr 17, 2020
Writing Feedback / The use of online platforms for business meetings and trainings - pros and cons [5]

1. You utilised flexibly topic-related vocabularies with excellent collocations.
2. You had good ideas to develop, but you need to be further in explaining and giving examples for each main points.
For me, I really love the way you used vocabulary, so smoothly.
Nguyen Ngoc Huon   
Apr 17, 2020
Writing Feedback / The development of online courses is negative or positive? [6]

1. I really love the way you operate each point with clear examples in the first paragraph
2. in the second paragraph, you put too much ideas in one paragraph and not develop further for each, which may be a minus for your essay. Just focus on specific ideas and develop fully.
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