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md1411   
Mar 3, 2010
Poetry / Down at the Beach -- at least 150 words [4]

Down at the Beach - poem

Down at the beach
The waves trying and trying to reach out
A man grabbing at the sand
Like it is a shovel, only it is his hand

Down at the Beach
The sand sticking to everybody like Glue
With the Blue watery ocean in view
Sand here, sand there,
The sand is everywhere

Down at the Beach
The lifeguards watch over
The seagulls hovering around and around
People lying on the sand, people in the water
and maybe some call for help

Down at the Beach
The flags are standing tall and proud
Like soldiers at a Funeral
As they will lye
Down at the beach

by
Malcolm
md1411   
Mar 5, 2010
Poetry / Down at the Beach -- at least 150 words [4]

I appreciate your input and feedback.It does make sense to me know.Yes i am suppose to analyse the poem and main reference to the word structures.

thanks for your help
Malcolm
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