nachismo
Dec 27, 2012
Undergraduate / Loving supportive relationships with parents; Brown Supp (Something You Created) [4]
Hey there, just wanted to see if this made sense. Thanks for your help!:)
Prompt: What is something you created that makes you especially proud, and why?
I did homework. My mom talked on the phone. My dad worked on the computer. Seven months ago, this was routine. I lived as self-sufficiently as possible, and my parents tiptoed around me. Now, everything has changed. My father has become a bank of wisdom, the biggest advocate for my happiness, and a great hugger. My mother is an innovative problem solver, a fun movie companion, and a true role model. By making myself accountable for my relationships, I created loving, supportive relationships with my parents that will enrich my life forever. I am proud to have such amazing people for parents, and I am proud to have transformed so I can appreciate them for it.
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Hey there, just wanted to see if this made sense. Thanks for your help!:)
Prompt: What is something you created that makes you especially proud, and why?
I did homework. My mom talked on the phone. My dad worked on the computer. Seven months ago, this was routine. I lived as self-sufficiently as possible, and my parents tiptoed around me. Now, everything has changed. My father has become a bank of wisdom, the biggest advocate for my happiness, and a great hugger. My mother is an innovative problem solver, a fun movie companion, and a true role model. By making myself accountable for my relationships, I created loving, supportive relationships with my parents that will enrich my life forever. I am proud to have such amazing people for parents, and I am proud to have transformed so I can appreciate them for it.
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