Graduate / Design Industry develops fast in Kazakhstan; MA Interior Architecture [2]

My country, Kazakhstan, is on the threshold of hectic development in design like garments, textile, furniture, architecture and interior design etc. Design industry of Kazakhstan is in a tearing hurry to make up the lost time and catch up with the developed countries in other parts of the worlddeveloped world and achieving better designs. Interior design and Architecture will play a major role in changing the face of Kazakhstan panorama and I hope to be a part of it.

Now I'm a 23 years old Interior Designer, successfully graduated in 2012 year from ISTITUTO MARANGONI London, UK. My motto is "Design is everywhere, it touches and affects everyone."

During my interior design education, I also was also focused on continuing my further education in Interior Architecture. I'm happy to be an Interior Designer, I enjoy it, every step of the way. But I always hadhave interest in architecture. For me Architecture is close to Interior Design, this whythat is why Interior Architecture sounds perfect for me.

I've had a love for the interior for as long as I can remember. While I was a child, I used to move all the furniture around every single month; I never needed to buy new things, because at the end everything always looked amazingly renovated. I knewknow thatorAt that time i knew that I would like to do it for life. My passion for Interiors growth and a desire to be a Designer came together.

When I started my studystudies as an Interior Designer I realized that Interior design is more than the creation of shapes, materials and constructions in a functional,and spatial setting. Interior design is the art of creating environments that communicate meaning in a cultural context. Interior design isn't just about home decoration however it is concerned with creating functional and beautiful to look atmaking interior spaces functional as well as beautiful in all sorts of places including houses, public buildings and commercial properties such as shops, restaurants, leisure venues and offices. Interior design can also be applied to temporary environments, whethersuch as pop-up shops that are in existence for just a few months at a time, or exhibition stands that may simply last for days. Anything that has an interior can be designed, redesigned or refurbished.

But still I can't say that interior architecture, interior design or any design is what everyone needs and without what no one can survive, it's not that essential. Food and warm house are peoples priority, it was so during many years and it will remain. But time doesn't stay still and we are not living in a Dark Ages any longer, nowadays everything changed, we have electricity and central heating in our houses, we live at age when people can create so many beautiful and functional things, we have new desires, we looking for more comfortable live, more luxuries and it is what I can do for people. I want to bring the transformative power of design to the things that matter. Find out what design can do for health, innovation and the built environment. My goal is to make people's life easier, more comfortable, brighter and I will use my knowledge as a tool in my arms to achieve my goals.

I chose to study in Europe as I felt design is more advanced there than the rest of the world. The thought of doingpursuing or continuing my further education in Europe always intrigued me because I believe it is a land of free and promising design. For me Netherlands looks innovative and advanced. I admire Dutch Design and strongly believe it is also a good chance for me to learn a new language and meet newpeople from different culture. Piet Zwart Institute with its excellent facilities, highly qualified faculty and world-class infrastructure is the right place for pursuing masters in Interior Architecture and if given a chance, I shall make the best out of it. You will find me to be a committed and capable student. I will give you my very best, by learning more of Interior Architecture and taking it to the classroom and beyond. Generating new ideas is the most exciting activity possible for me. I can tell that Interior is right for me because I have fun doing it. I am determined to make the most of the education that I have received from my classes and life by following my indefatigable quest for knowing/learning more and more about interior designing and sharing what I discover with the interior world.

At the same timeI believe thatthe life position and an outstanding repute of Piet Zwart Institute in particular in Kazakhstan will surely inspire me to learn chosen course painstakingly, and will actuates me to display all my capabilities and i will be able to contribute significantly to my university life.

Nice essay.
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