phuonganh999
Sep 27, 2015
Scholarship / Why I desire to join the UWC community and reflect on UWC's mission and values - statement [10]
Hello, i'm entering for UWC Schoolarship and have 2 essays to finish. i have already done my first essay and i'm writing my second essay. I'm not very well about English grammar so please take a look at my essay and help me t fix it. Thank you so much. It means a lot to me. The subject is:
" Write a statement explaining why you are interested in attending a UWC and reflecting on UWC's mission and values, what you might contribute to the college, and what you would hope to gain from the experience"
When i was young, i always had a desire to explore the world but i do not have enough financial to have journeys to other countries. And from that, my curiosity about distant lands is larger through every years since i just came to Cambodia, which is very close to my country-Vietnam, and other provinces such as Nha Trang, Da Nang, Sai Gon, Hai Phong in my country. In a country as small as mine, it does not take too long to reach the limit of things you can do and see. I only have a chance to read and see other places through books and television channel such as Discovery but even i know all about other countries it still could not make me satisfied by real experiences. I really want to experience new cultures and obtain more knowledge, which is the reason why i start to examine UWC's schoolarship.
A few months ago, I have already done some researches about my destination is Singapore such as people, their lifestyles, traditional food and festivals and i am sure i will explore more in the months i have left. However, the major reason of attending at UWC is i want to show the beautiful of my country's cultures that other countries do not have and i also want to join exchanges between my countries and their countries. Furthermore, it would be interesting to have an opportunity to be acquainted with many friends from difference nations but it also because the singularity of a place where so many viewpoints gather which attracts me.
In conclusion, UWC's values impressed me once i heard and read about them, i was persuade to apply because they resemble what kind of person i want to be and bring the opportunity of experiencing the world to me.
Hello, i'm entering for UWC Schoolarship and have 2 essays to finish. i have already done my first essay and i'm writing my second essay. I'm not very well about English grammar so please take a look at my essay and help me t fix it. Thank you so much. It means a lot to me. The subject is:
" Write a statement explaining why you are interested in attending a UWC and reflecting on UWC's mission and values, what you might contribute to the college, and what you would hope to gain from the experience"
When i was young, i always had a desire to explore the world but i do not have enough financial to have journeys to other countries. And from that, my curiosity about distant lands is larger through every years since i just came to Cambodia, which is very close to my country-Vietnam, and other provinces such as Nha Trang, Da Nang, Sai Gon, Hai Phong in my country. In a country as small as mine, it does not take too long to reach the limit of things you can do and see. I only have a chance to read and see other places through books and television channel such as Discovery but even i know all about other countries it still could not make me satisfied by real experiences. I really want to experience new cultures and obtain more knowledge, which is the reason why i start to examine UWC's schoolarship.
A few months ago, I have already done some researches about my destination is Singapore such as people, their lifestyles, traditional food and festivals and i am sure i will explore more in the months i have left. However, the major reason of attending at UWC is i want to show the beautiful of my country's cultures that other countries do not have and i also want to join exchanges between my countries and their countries. Furthermore, it would be interesting to have an opportunity to be acquainted with many friends from difference nations but it also because the singularity of a place where so many viewpoints gather which attracts me.
In conclusion, UWC's values impressed me once i heard and read about them, i was persuade to apply because they resemble what kind of person i want to be and bring the opportunity of experiencing the world to me.