Dinesh123
Jul 5, 2016
Writing Feedback / Essay about recording keeping through video or witing [5]
Present your perspective on the issue below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views.
"The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records."
Please review this and help me to grade it.
The statement about the recording cotemporary life from video camera accurately and convincingly it-self contradictory. Though for the record of family amusing activity , entertainment purpose, and cultural purpose it is suitable ,however, but for the purpose of official activities like documentation of official records it is unrelevent.
The recorded materials itself become very difficult to analysis . For example the record of map of particular area. It will be unsuitable to record in video. Also for the analysis purposes searching in video camara is very difficult task. Similarly many treaty either local issue or international political issues, recording in video is itself illogical .For example International conference about global warming all the country presented their idea and the documentation in video , itself illogical.
The recorded items from video camara may not include all the necessities at a time. The required information either may be lacking or misrepresented. For example the earthquake in Nepal , that was happen in April, 25 ,2015 the CC Camara record do not include all the moments. For the detail description and informing future generation other form of documentation like written documentation is necessary.Day by day many diseaster like flood , quake and war happens through out the word , documentation of all the events is not possible. Similarly the explanation of the recording items to the interesting people is also challenging and banal, because people mostly use video for entertainment purpose not for enlightening purpose.
Similary, it is always not possible to carry video camara to capture each and every incidents. For this purpose we need video camara all the time with us . But it is not possible . If luckly camara is avialble then other necessities like battery , stand for camara is also required which is itself illogical .
Since recording from video camara not necessierly include all the requirement , analysis of result itself very difficult , and it is not always possible to carry camara all the time video camara cannot give convincing record of contemporary life all the time.
Present your perspective on the issue below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views.
"The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records."
Please review this and help me to grade it.
The statement about the recording cotemporary life from video camera accurately and convincingly it-self contradictory. Though for the record of family amusing activity , entertainment purpose, and cultural purpose it is suitable ,however, but for the purpose of official activities like documentation of official records it is unrelevent.
The recorded materials itself become very difficult to analysis . For example the record of map of particular area. It will be unsuitable to record in video. Also for the analysis purposes searching in video camara is very difficult task. Similarly many treaty either local issue or international political issues, recording in video is itself illogical .For example International conference about global warming all the country presented their idea and the documentation in video , itself illogical.
The recorded items from video camara may not include all the necessities at a time. The required information either may be lacking or misrepresented. For example the earthquake in Nepal , that was happen in April, 25 ,2015 the CC Camara record do not include all the moments. For the detail description and informing future generation other form of documentation like written documentation is necessary.Day by day many diseaster like flood , quake and war happens through out the word , documentation of all the events is not possible. Similarly the explanation of the recording items to the interesting people is also challenging and banal, because people mostly use video for entertainment purpose not for enlightening purpose.
Similary, it is always not possible to carry video camara to capture each and every incidents. For this purpose we need video camara all the time with us . But it is not possible . If luckly camara is avialble then other necessities like battery , stand for camara is also required which is itself illogical .
Since recording from video camara not necessierly include all the requirement , analysis of result itself very difficult , and it is not always possible to carry camara all the time video camara cannot give convincing record of contemporary life all the time.