Essays / I'm confused about how to understand an essay question or topic sentence [13]

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Essays / I'm confused about how to understand an essay question or topic sentence [13]

Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Other choose friends who are similar to themselves. Compare the advantages of having friends who are different from you with the advantages of friends who are similar to you. Which kinds of friend do you prefer? Why?

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Although friends who are different are agreeable to you, i prefer friends who are similar to me. They can be flexble to my humiliating behaviors in school.

First, there are advantages of friends who are different to you. Despite the fact that it is difficult to adapt to old students, you have more confidence to follow your dream without any biases. Even though some prejudices become of you, you are not anxious about them. When there are projects in group, you are confident to express your opinions. You are able to present distinct points from other group members. In an individual paper, you are not shy about explain it to other classmates in front of the class without any embarrassment. Moreover, you can go anywhere alone. During the free time, you think about reading books under a tree shade near a flag post, which is very suited to self-learning.

Second, there are advantages of friends who are similar to you. It is very easy to make friends with existing students. When working in group, you are assigned works equally. If having problems, other group members come to help you. Moreover, you have a lot of friends to eat lunch and study in group in the free time. They want you to go to a school library to pick out useful books to read. Before going home, you can talk to your friends about what to do and where to meet tomorrow.

Finally, i prefer friends who are similar to me because i am too shy to express myself openly. When first going to school, i need a friend who introduces me to other students in class. As i am not talkative, i want a friend who chooses a group for me. I am not confident when assigned works to do; therefore, it is better for me to have a friend who can select appropriate papers.

Even though always going alone, i really want one who can sit down and read books, especially in a library. Besides, I will not be happy if i have to go home without having a meeting with a friend. I want one who will go to school with me tomorrow.

In conclusion, many benefits of friends dissimilar to me is apparent to me; conversely, i need a friend who is able to quickly adapt to my sensitive feelings in order to help direct me towards a good future.

Essays / The prompt asks - A/D: teachers should be compensated based on how well their students do [9]

This is my essay. i am not sure whether it is logical.

I take around two hours. It should be the worst one because i alway spend not more than one hour to finish an essay.

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Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

To my view, how much students learn depends on money paid to teachers. They will have incentives, pay attention to students' concerns in class, and even spare extra time outside the class to help them. Therefore, teachers are able to give more knowledge to students.

In the first place, paid teachers can bring other papers and feel fresh to teach students. If paid, they have money to buy a car in order to drive to school early in the morning. They use money to buy additional materials such as books and educational videos and provide free handouts in order to distribute students in class. During the day. teachers have money to eat healthy food so that they refresh themselves before going to teach students in the rest of the day.

In the second place, paid teachers are willing to help students solve problems during the class. While teachers are preparing a lesson in class, students can ask them for what will be taught this course. They explain briefly to the students so that they are ready for coming assignments. When doing a given work, students can call out teachers to help revise and correct its complicated parts. When finishing the assigned work, students have an opportunity to have an one-on-one conversation with teachers in order to talk about whether the submitted assignment is difficult or not.

Finally, After a regular class, teachers have students consult both assigned paper and issues sensitive to students' educational goals. Before a normal time is over, teachers may say anyone who do not know learn a lot from lectures can go to the office where teachers work in the free time. Moreover, students can ask them for other issues such as a future study plan, a university admission and problems about poor grades.

In conclusion, without a monthly salary, teachers cannot take teaching students to their heart, which result in a low quality of education. However, Teachers with monthly wages will contribute to students' achievements by taking heed of students' worries in class and spending more time with those students in trouble with strong motivation.

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Essays / The prompt asks - A/D: teachers should be compensated based on how well their students do [9]

Thank you for your help?

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For example, Politics: it can be civil war.
There should be points to support civil war, such as neighboring countries, religious dispute.

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Try to realize that points should be the same categories such as behaviors, feeling

Writing Feedback / the problems of balancing school, job and a family. [7]

Writing an argumentative essay is recommended

Create a problem and find ways to solve it. Then, focus on benefits you get from tackling that trouble.

A topic sentence is about balacing of school
supporting sentences can be
Problem== too much work in school, little time to do housework
Solution== prepare a time schudule, set the priority
Benefits== more time to do both homework and housework at the same time.

Job and family can be written in the arguementative style.

Essays / I'm confused about how to understand an essay question or topic sentence [13]

Thank you for your help

Essays / I'm confused about how to understand an essay question or topic sentence [13]

The question is that
Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Other choose friends who are similar to themselves. Compare the advantages of having friends who are different from you with the advantages of friends who are similar to you. Which kinds of friend do you prefer? Why?

i have to write both advantages or just choose one friend and write why i like him. Explantory or preference

Thank you