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Posts by Jazzmin
Name: Jazmin
Joined: Feb 4, 2019
Last Post: Feb 8, 2019
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From: Mexico
School: Chemistry

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Feb 4, 2019
Graduate / Chemistry Study - PERSONAL STATEMENT for scholarship [2]

Hello this year im going to apply for a scholarship in a masteer degree in pharmacy and cosmetics in Korea.

This is my statement, thank you all for your help

this scholarship will allow me to expand my goals

Respectable members of the scholarships and admissions committee my name is ******* I'm a professional of chemistry sciences, when they ask me why I studied chemistry, I'm pleased to answer that having studied chemistry gave me the technical and analytical skills as well as competence to develop myself in any professional and personal field. During the course of my career I always participated in research activities, my social service was in a laboratory of Microbiology of Research, through this experience came the opportunity to continue with my thesis project which was in a Molecular Biology laboratory having participated in these activities, aroused in me the interest to solve problems and give results through research. Later in the work environment I followed the same field; This last experience was what made me realize that I had to continue on the path of research, I had the opportunity to work for a company in the area of research and development of generic medicines, as a professional I was in charge of driving every project from the beginning until the medicine could go on the market. This is why I know the responsibility that is to create products with quality, safety and efficacy; however I realize that these areas are always full of challenge.

Why do I want to continue with my studies, my motivation is the following; I want to be able to answer the new questions and needs that are generated in these areas and I will achieve it through the subjects that I am going to study, when I review the subjects that are taken in the postgraduate courses that I aspire to, an emotion grew in me, because I knew that it would be the path that would take me to find the answers, it fills me with enthusiasm to think about everything that I have to learn, to later contribute new things that can solve the unknowns that chemistry as a science has and that I as a professional can solve, apply and teach later. I would like to have this experience in another country and be able to focus only on my master because I know that I have great potential that I still have to exploit.

Korea is a country that inspires me a huge admiration for its history as well as its culture that unites technology with tradition, I feel a deep respect towards its discipline and its world-class educational level; I feel a deep respect towards its level of studies worldwide. Its language, being so different from mine, makes me foresee that I will have to make an effort to learn and master it. That is why at this moment I am already taking classes which has also allowed me to get a little closer to its culture and continue to be interested in it. The prestigious universities that I aspire to be in this country have incredible resources and technologies that would help me expand my knowledge and experience in order to become a highly trained professional in my field of study. Preparing myself in this way in a country with a great history of growth and improvement, being the bridge of communication between this country and mine is a task that I will carry out with enthusiasm.

South Korea is one of the safest countries with a large number of foreign students satisfied with the level of education and quality of life. Being the Asian country that exports more cosmetics, its technological advances in this and other areas such as pharmaceutical make this country a world power. South Korea in particular has caught my attention as I find their products innovative and much more advanced than Western brands. These areas are related to my professional training and my academic and personal interests, my interest in learning about their subjects, their science and their technology lies in the desire to contribute through research more resources in these sciences, resources that can be used in the daily life of people in this country, my country or anywhere in the world. Having the opportunity to continue preparing professionally, while I share my culture and represent my country is a task that I intend to carry out in an honorable way.

Through chemistry, I have been able to fulfill my initial objective of study, to be a professional that is capable of contributing to the welfare of society. Through this scholarship I will be able to expand my goals; provide solutions through research, solutions that help others to improve their quality of life by creating innovative products that make a society thrive. Finally, a single truth has guided my life until now and that is to face the challenges, overcome them and achieve the goal. Thank you for considering me for this scholarship, I will not waste your trust placed on me.
Feb 5, 2019
Graduate / KGSP Application - Part 2 (research goal - how can I contribute?) [7]

I think it is very long and you have to concentrate more on the general objectives of your research, how? and that? and through what you are going to do. Everything you mention about attending courses is not a study plan, I think you should omit that information
Feb 5, 2019
Graduate / KGSP-Graduate Personal Statement for Archaeology; Dead Men Do Tell Tales [4]

Sorry but this seems more like a letter about the things you like, this has to be a letter that makes you look like a candidate for a country to invest in you, I think you should pay more attention to your previous experience that has made you Take the decision to take a master's degree.
Feb 7, 2019
Scholarship / KGSP PERSONAL STATEMENT ESSAY - Embassy Track [4]


In general, you have to talk about how your work experience or your studies can be related or complemented with the master's degree you chose and because you chose Korea to do your master's degree, you have to handle not only cultural information but significant contributions from this country to your area of ‚Äč‚Äčexpertise.

Not only is it important to mention the leadership part, but also the research part, which is what you will focus on when you are there.

I hope you serve the advice!
Feb 8, 2019
Graduate / KGSP Application - Part 2 (research goal - how can I contribute?) [7]

I think that since you mentioned that you have learned korean for three years its enough if you only mention that you will continue studying as you have doing all this time but even harder, not need to put a lof of information in that paragraph.

I'm also going to apply, best wishes for you.
Feb 8, 2019
Scholarship / The cosmetic and pharmaceutical market - KGSP Study Plan [3]

Hii this is my study plan o goal of study and also my future plan, I hope you can help me. Thanks a lot.


As a candidate for a master's degree, I plan to conduct research that is capable of providing new and efficient ways to meet the needs of the cosmetic and pharmaceutical market. Through the correct investigation and based on the knowledge acquired in classes it is possible to achieve models that cover the needs in each sector of these areas; first, a broad investigation in the market to know the needs that must be faced and second, the creation of new materials that can be applied in the creation of the new products. In my previous experience as a project leader in a pharmaceutical company, I can say that if this set of activities is created in a project, this will undoubtedly be successful. I could be part of the labor field and I want to take this into the field of research.

During the first and second period of my master's degree I intend to gather all the knowledge about formulations and unit it with mine to be able to begin to gather the statistical data that will serve as the basis for the creation of a new product.

During the following periods I will begin with the experimental phases with the collaboration of industries and technology to finally present an innovative product in my thesis.

My goal is to make this project provide real data and be a source of information and a starting point for the future creation of new products as well as research. 1 at a time.