Priyanka3
Aug 17, 2010
Undergraduate / Sport: Tennis - Common App Short Answer [5]
Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below
I couldn't figure out which beginning to use so the following were my choices..
Everybody says high school is the era in your life, in which the mistakes you make, the friendships that you gain, help you find who you truly are. Entering my senior year in high school, I'm starting to realize the credibility in that saying, and luckily for me, a great part in discovering myself occurred in my favorite hobby, Tennis.
OR
Playing tennis for the first time at the tryouts in my freshmen year, I would have never been able to predict all the morals and values it has granted me currently. Entering my senior year now, I have gained many valuable friendships, ambition for trying unfamiliar things and most importantly felt the most rewarding feeling of triumph in my own improvement.
And the rest is..
As it is a sport in which a team has to unify for victory, rather than one man for himself, tennis has taught me how to be a team player, and allowed me to feel the joy of being selfless in helping others progress. After long tiring practices, I've learned success comes with hard work, and pays off as it did in winning games and in academics. Those long bus rides after winning games, and losing others, showed me the true importance of the comfort and joy we had felt in the company of each other rather than the outcome of the game.
Any comments of how to improve it would be greatly appreciated! Also its a bit over 150 words.. so if you know any unnecessary words to remove, please let me know! Thank you!!
-Priyanka
Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below
I couldn't figure out which beginning to use so the following were my choices..
Everybody says high school is the era in your life, in which the mistakes you make, the friendships that you gain, help you find who you truly are. Entering my senior year in high school, I'm starting to realize the credibility in that saying, and luckily for me, a great part in discovering myself occurred in my favorite hobby, Tennis.
OR
Playing tennis for the first time at the tryouts in my freshmen year, I would have never been able to predict all the morals and values it has granted me currently. Entering my senior year now, I have gained many valuable friendships, ambition for trying unfamiliar things and most importantly felt the most rewarding feeling of triumph in my own improvement.
And the rest is..
As it is a sport in which a team has to unify for victory, rather than one man for himself, tennis has taught me how to be a team player, and allowed me to feel the joy of being selfless in helping others progress. After long tiring practices, I've learned success comes with hard work, and pays off as it did in winning games and in academics. Those long bus rides after winning games, and losing others, showed me the true importance of the comfort and joy we had felt in the company of each other rather than the outcome of the game.
Any comments of how to improve it would be greatly appreciated! Also its a bit over 150 words.. so if you know any unnecessary words to remove, please let me know! Thank you!!
-Priyanka