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Essay A:What Are The Most Important Qualities A Leader Must Have In Today's Society [4]
You are repeating ''leader" so often that your essay don't sound good.
Just read it aloud and you'll understand what I mean.
A positive attitude is another essential quality
a leader must have in order to do well in office.
A leader must see things in a positive light or else everything will not go as planned. For example, if a huge crisis was going on and
a leader had a mind of a pessimist, he would scare
"his people " into thinking the situation is way worse than what it really is. On the other hand, and optimist would look on the "bright" side and think positive and think of a way to overcome the crisis and assure
"his people" that everything is OK. Which is something
all leaders should do.Respect is a quality that
all leaders should have. When
a leader is respectful,
his people will respect him in return.
The people want someone who looks out for their best interest as well as respect them. If
a leader doesn't show respect or show that they care, no one will accept him/her as their
leader.A leader is a role model. One who sets positive examples for others.
A leader who doesn't have the motivation, respect, and the right mind-set will not and can not do well in office. it's the ones who see the world as an optimist who will make great leaders.
I also consider that you should write better introduction: one sentences doesn't seem enoough for me.
I'm not a native speaker, so my suggestions might be wrong. You can take it or leave it. It's up to you.