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Nov 1, 2011
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Descriptive Food Essay--Delicious Parisian Crepe
I have to write a descriptive essay about food. I choose to write about a crepe in Paris but I need help with what to write.
I need suggestions on what to write about in the first paragraph after the intro.
The second?
The third?
Thanks-
Laura
Descriptive Food Essay--Delicious Parisian Crepe
I have to write a descriptive essay about food. I choose to write about a crepe in Paris but I need help with what to write.
I need suggestions on what to write about in the first paragraph after the intro.
The second?
The third?
Thanks-
Laura