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Posts by ohemgee
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Feb 1, 2012
Scholarship / Scholarship Introduction: Right to the point or an anecdote? [6]

I've been shortlisted for 3 scholarships covering the same criteria. This is currently my introduction. Any ways to improve it? Make it stand out? I was hoping for the second paragraph to write about my personal experiences that has shaped me as the person as i am, or should i incorporate that in the introduction?

I am presently writing about my desire to apply for the ___________ scholarship. Currently I am a first year university student undertaking a Bachelor in Commerce and Arts which I believe will aid me towards a future in Human Resource, expand my knowledge base and to travel. Throughout high school I've participated in extracurricular activities, including valuable volunteer experiences. I have striven for academic excellence which has been reflected upon my results in the HSC. In addition I have undertaken work experience during my senior year of study as a means of broadening my skills and knowledge outside a school environment.
ohemgee   
Feb 1, 2012
Student Talk / How to enhance my English? [52]

It's one thing to get the books to learn, but PRACTICE. Understand the concept, or the point the book makes about grammar etc and apply it everyday and practice.
ohemgee   
Feb 1, 2012
Letters / 'my career has just started' - my motivation letter for Master's program [3]

There is no harm in applying for it? Who knows you might get it and if you don't well you know you tried.

I have chosen Radboud University as the opportunities provided parallel to those I've been in search for.it provides its students with the opportunities I have been looking for. It offers Master's degree in Business Administration with specialization in Marketing, the exact course thatwhich is perfect for me as it is exactly what I study in my home University. Moreover, Radboud University offers good opportunities for intertanional students, for example, Radboud University Scholarship I am applying for.
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