readerxmog
Jul 15, 2012
Writing Feedback / 'gold fish' - my pet essay [2]
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my pet
my pet is a gold fish.its name is Sonny.there are more than three types of gold fish.it is in the carp family.the gold fish was the first fish to be domesticated. the japans were the first
to start breeding them.they come from East Asia.
the gold fish likes to eat palates vegetables and meat.i feed it twice a day.the gold fish was brought from japan . my father went to japan when he was doing his project .he saw some people selling gold fish . my father bought it for ten dollars .when he came with it home i was so happy . after hat ! i am taking care of it
sonny is very smart when i turn off the light sleeps. i love sonny because he can spine.
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please comment
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my pet
my pet is a gold fish.its name is Sonny.there are more than three types of gold fish.it is in the carp family.the gold fish was the first fish to be domesticated. the japans were the first
to start breeding them.they come from East Asia.
the gold fish likes to eat palates vegetables and meat.i feed it twice a day.the gold fish was brought from japan . my father went to japan when he was doing his project .he saw some people selling gold fish . my father bought it for ten dollars .when he came with it home i was so happy . after hat ! i am taking care of it
sonny is very smart when i turn off the light sleeps. i love sonny because he can spine.
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