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Sep 24, 2012
Writing Feedback / 'The Hunger Games' - literacy narrative to proof read [2]

I have always thrived in math and science courses, but when it came to reading there was something about it that made me cringe.

have indicates present tense , while your sentence is built on past tense. I hope i got me point clear.
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