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Sep 6, 2013
Writing Feedback / GRE: past achievement within a field may consequently lead to more success [3]
When the issue comes whether it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being influenced by past achievements You should not directly copy the statement but change a bit: when the issue comes, that whether the influence of past achievement is possible or not to make a significant contribution within one field , people express/have different opinions. Despite the strengtheness of achievement experience, I want to argue that without significant past achievement in one field, people can still achieve splendidly, for the following reasons
When the issue comes whether it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being influenced by past achievements You should not directly copy the statement but change a bit: when the issue comes, that whether the influence of past achievement is possible or not to make a significant contribution within one field , people express/have different opinions. Despite the strengtheness of achievement experience, I want to argue that without significant past achievement in one field, people can still achieve splendidly, for the following reasons