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Ramitha   
Aug 29, 2013
Writing Feedback / City living or country living? advantages and disadvantages [4]

Here are some mistakes I see

That is the most difficult question to answer, because each of thisthese two lifestyles have both advantages and disadvantages.

Country living is healthy, quiet-quite perfect for people who want to live a peaceful life, but extremely boring for active people who cannot allow themselves a moment's respite[/quote]

First of all, we have to consider the convenienceconveniences of living in a big city such as all the services people usually need are mostly spread in over capitals and big cities, so you can get all that you need in a short time and quickermore quickly than in suburbs or in small towns.

There are a lot more mistakes... I suggest you do a complete revamp
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