eddies [Contributor]
Nov 9, 2015
Writing Feedback / IELTS Task 1: The Arresting Percentage of Societies in Five Years Ending 1994 [3]
Fast forward to your preceding IELTS report, I' ve told you that such phrases can be categorized as "shopping list", putting the information one fact after another. When it comes to the real exam, I am sure that you'll have points deducted being with this list. Listen, in IELTS you are tested in how good you deal with contrast and comparison patterns and the key-trend selection.
A closer look at my intro;
A breakdown of the proportion of males and females who who had just placed under arrested from 1989 to 1994 is presented in the pie chart, while the bar chart shows motivation behind the cases. As it can be seen, the total figures for males sent to jail were higher than those of females. In any case, there did seem to be common reason that people all got arrested with regard to public drinking.
such as drink driving, public drinking, breach of order, assault, and theft.
Fast forward to your preceding IELTS report, I' ve told you that such phrases can be categorized as "shopping list", putting the information one fact after another. When it comes to the real exam, I am sure that you'll have points deducted being with this list. Listen, in IELTS you are tested in how good you deal with contrast and comparison patterns and the key-trend selection.
A closer look at my intro;
A breakdown of the proportion of males and females who who had just placed under arrested from 1989 to 1994 is presented in the pie chart, while the bar chart shows motivation behind the cases. As it can be seen, the total figures for males sent to jail were higher than those of females. In any case, there did seem to be common reason that people all got arrested with regard to public drinking.