Wolf Larsen
Aug 27, 2016
Writing Feedback / Summary Article Global Warming Started to Happen In A Long Time Ago [2]
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Your text will sound much better if some of the contained sentences are to be paraphrased as follows:
Many people [...] believe that.... has startedfrom [...] in the 20th century.
According to [...] the new study by..., which was published in the Nature magazine (?), humanity has been contributing to the phenomena ever since the mid-19th century.
This implies that [...] the climate changes we are witnessing right now began to take place as far back, as 180 years ago.
The data [...] Such a finding has been brought about by the scientific research, conducted over the samples of coral reefs and ice.
They have [...] Scientists concluded that throughout the time-period in question, there has been a steady increase of the atmosphere's average temperature, which in turn can be linked to a variety of the climate-affecting factors, such as the circulation of water in oceans.
This [...], in fact, is one of the reasons why...
Although [...] However, there can be only a few doubts that it was namely during the 20the century that humanity has contributed the most towards triggering the so-called 'greenhouse effect'.
The higher [...] In this respect, the human activities of littering and deforesting appear to have been especially contributive.
If this continues [...] to happen, humanity will be forced to pay a heavy price.
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Hello
Your text will sound much better if some of the contained sentences are to be paraphrased as follows:
Many people [...] believe that.... has started
According to [...] the new study by..., which was published in the Nature magazine (?), humanity has been contributing to the phenomena ever since the mid-19th century.
This implies that [...] the climate changes we are witnessing right now began to take place as far back, as 180 years ago.
This [...], in fact, is one of the reasons why...
If this continues [...] to happen, humanity will be forced to pay a heavy price.
I hope this came of help. Regards.