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Posts by Aris05
Name: Aris Indra
Joined: Aug 25, 2016
Last Post: Oct 12, 2016
Threads: 31
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From: Indonesia
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Aris05   
Sep 13, 2016
Writing Feedback / Have Three Weeks for a Vacation? There Are Trips for You (Summary of article) [3]

Hai al. I have some thought for you

... holiday a long time because there isare travel companies offerofferingathe nicest destination that ...

... for a longer gateway which havehas plenty of time

holiday is an activity

this service of treveling which causes several companies

In the same way, it provides the variety of wonderful destinations which are in Australia, Canada and New Zealand.

That's it, i wish it could be useful.
Aris05   
Sep 13, 2016
Writing Feedback / Logging is a series of activities in the field of forestry which damage the environment [2]

hi faje, I have some thought for you

The logging is a series (...) which is using and managemanaging the timber that work conflicts with the law.

The logging industry demagesdamages the environment (...) that are usefull for our life

For excampelsexamples ; raptils, ampihibians, and mammals.
this impects these impacts will influence the continuity in the future for our next generation and health.

The logging can also demagedamage the soil

Therefore , we should keep (...) responsible logging practicae s would help ans sure that they are protacted for the future generation.

That's, I wish it could be useful. best regard
Aris05   
Sep 1, 2016
Writing Feedback / My summary task about social Networking [9]

Recently, The popularity of a social networking on the internet has rapidly risen throughout the world. The social networking facilitates many people to share their personal information created by community. The data shows that three-fourths of the internet users operate the social networking among the people of all the ages. The super popularity of the social networking gives advantage and disadvantage to users. The upside is to ease to connect with friends, relatives and old friends. The entrepreneurs as well use it to run their enterprise, to find out the job vacancy, or to look for a new client. The internet eradicates the need of the space and direct communication. On the other hand, the damages of the social networking have risen. It has some potential risks like most people spend immense time with their online friend causing less time with their local community. The Adolescents have been influenced easily. The social networking will affect our social life.
Aris05   
Sep 1, 2016
Writing Feedback / SUMMARY TASK 8 - WHY ARE WOMEN LEAVING SCIENCE CAREERS ? [6]

Hi miss oca. this is my feedback.

The result of an academic research declared

why women givinggive up on their careers behind...

one of some important mattersthat required by company
1. matter that are required by company.
2. matter required by company.


growing the children and educateeducating them

women are not suggested to having have babies anymore

I hope it usefull
Aris05   
Aug 31, 2016
Writing Feedback / Maintaining repeated customers is a prevalent aim within a business. My summary about Brand Loyalty [2]

Mantaining repeat customer is a prevalent aim within a business. Most of the enterpreneurs prefer to keep a committed clientele rather than to draw a new customer. Psychological bond is the most important factor creating a brand loyalty while tertiary need has strong role to create a true brand loyalty. Customers pertain to their product with the symbolic status for instance buying a clothes worn by an artist. Loyal customers are difficult to reverse because they have strong trust for a product. Brand loyalty occurs when people have much more money to spend. In period of downturn economic, customer is less selective and prefer to buy a cheaper product. However the condition doesn't exist in the other countries having disposable income. The Brand loyality is not populer in a country having fewer choices and price as the priority.
Aris05   
Aug 31, 2016
Writing Feedback / Beneficial relaxation. Learning vacation is a new kind of holiday [5]

Learning vacation has a new concept to provide a different experience. It prefers to spend the time by learning something new rather than spending vacation time on a beach. The participators are able to enjoy a broad type of the travel such as join a prehistorical obeservation, study a biodiversity in the rain forest. Although at first the learning vacation was popular for young people who were still in school. Nowdays, it has been more prevalent for adult. Financing of arts school has become a good preference to spend the learning vacation. The participants will directly acquire the guidance of specialist. Britain also accept the adult travelers to join few days course throughout the country. The upside of the vacation is more economical than tradisional vacation because the travelers can arrange the trip by themselves without involving travel agent. There are many posibilities of learning vacation, so you can choose appropiate with your wish.
Aris05   
Aug 30, 2016
Writing Feedback / The changes at West park School since 1950 - after the demand for personal vehicles increased [2]

Hai Ziad. I have some constructive feedbacks for you.

... Secondary School at West Park first was constructed in 1950.

the green area has gone gradually

While the children area remained the same as early built building

it is becomebecoming smaller in last three decades.

houses for people stay , and the main road for to help people's activity.

They reduce the need of green area by changechangingwith sports field

swithswitched to car park area and ...

the children area remained the same as the builtbuilding before.

And they removed the (...) into playground area which is was reduced the amount ...

That's all. I hope it can be useful.
Aris05   
Aug 30, 2016
Writing Feedback / Natural deterioration has became a major concern in any part across the globe. [3]

Hai jomul. There are some constructive feed back for you

Natural deterioration has became become a major concern ...

... to this pressing issues only could only be performed by a big company and business

this An Indonesia oil company (...) program in several IndonesiaIndonesian jungle areas.

as they come with a huge resources

actually everyone havehas responsibility to make ...

Individual havehas vantage points since they are not ...

local occupants there has a belief .....
Aris05   
Aug 30, 2016
Writing Feedback / Malte Spitz: Your phone company is watching [4]

hai eka. This is my constructive feedback.

Malte has an experience forwhen asking his data to the companies.

He said that he hashad requested it for several ...

although they gave it in a number of monthfew months later

Malte explained it is important forto him because it is his live

He wanted to know what has been done by his self I don't understand what you mean

That's it. I hope it can be helpful.
Aris05   
Aug 25, 2016
Writing Feedback / TED - Averting the Climate Crisis. Make the massive persuasion campaign. [3]

What can you do about the climate crises ? In couple of days, we acquire the new temperature records in January. Prior average of januaries is 31 degrees but last month reached 39.5 degress. There are some cuases that spark the conditon. First of all, US contribution within globar warming under bussines as usual. Then there are cars and trucks leading the global warming because they are very significant and have the lowest standards in the world. The more global warming pollution come from buildings. To avoid the climate crises we can reduce emissions in home like buy green electricity, be a green consumer and make a decision to live a carbon natural life. Utilizing carbon calculator is neccesary in order to you can exactly count CO2 emissions. Next, you can consider making your business carbon neutral. Integrate climate solution into all of your innovations. Become catalyst of change in society, teach others about climate crises, and active in the politic to make democracy work. Make the massive persuasion campaign to influence many people Let's rebrand global warming "climate crises" instead of "planet collapse".
Aris05   
Aug 25, 2016
Writing Feedback / "green movement" - What is Ecotourism ? (Interesting tourism) [6]

The ecotourism concept arise out "green movement" that have meaning to preserve the natural environment. The goals not only avoid harming the environment but also give beneficial for local ecology and society. Ecotourism offers many types of destination like natural destination. It can spend a few weeks in remote area with local resident. Ecotourism look for enviromentally friendly accommodations such us renewable resources and recycling. It also seek out hotels and tourist companies that hire mainly local staff. Ecotourism usually don't use cruise ships because they produce not only a harmfull emmisions but also many tons of garbage and wastewater. The growing of ecotourism interest causes many companies advertise themselves as ecotourism companies although not all the companies practice the principle.The travelers must choose carefully and ensure that the company practice the ecotourism principle. The positive side is that become the indication of ecotourism development.
Aris05   
Aug 25, 2016
Writing Feedback / The main concept of ecotourism are make good environment and get income without injuring it [5]

Hii bams. I just wanna share my thought.

The ecotourism is new a concept to exploit environtment source

Ecotourism is one of many concepts to campaign green movement and perserve local ecology

There is are some example of ecotourism, such usas

The main concept of ecotourism are make good ...
The main concept of ecotourism ismaking good environtment and getting income without injuring environtment

That's it.I hope it can be useful for you.
Aris05   
Aug 25, 2016
Writing Feedback / Summary of Travelling in the Ancient Ruins in Peru. [5]

Hi path, let me give some feed for your essay

site Machu Piccu have draweddrawn of prehistorical Incan civilization

Since Archeologist Hiram Bingham foundedfound in 1911

The wonders building are nearby

That's it. I hope it can helpful
Aris05   
Aug 25, 2016
Writing Feedback / Sumary of Hiking the Inca Trail in The Andes Mountains [11]

Macchu Pichu is the ancient site in the Andes Mountains and tt was discoverd by archeologist in 1911. Macchu Pichu had been considered a sacred place for a long time. Although only few poeple is known about the activities that took place in that place, it seems that the function for obeserving the astronomy. The wonderful architecture and mystery of ancient culture attract thousand visitors throughout the world. They can access it by vehicle but hiking along Inca trail is the most populer track. Along the trip poeple can enjoy many marvels like magnificient orchids and birds. The trip has become so well-known since 2005. Eventually the government established the policy to protect natural environment and ruins. There are regulations about porters wage and the maximum of weight. It causes the price more higher. Therefore just a few visitors can access it but both of the environment and workers can be protected.

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