mdamanhuri77
Sep 19, 2016
Writing Feedback / Before electricity, flames provided limited light, and were vulnerable to winds and weather [2]
hi MJT, let me give you some advices.
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# you have made a good essay but sometimes you spelled wrongly and bad in building sentences
hi MJT, let me give you some advices.
Before electricity, flames
... railroad traffic became
Haratio Allan's in 1831 innovation, the "Track ...
In 1851, the first electric headlamp was
... headlamps were more stringent
# you have made a good essay but sometimes you spelled wrongly and bad in building sentences