Holt Educational Consultant
Apr 13, 2024
Writing Feedback / Pros and cons of developing tourism industry [4]
There are 2 guide questions that need to be responded to in the first paragraph if you are to receive full scoring consideration rather than point deductions in the Task Accuracy preliminary scoring section. You need to properly respond to "Why is this the case" and "Is this a positive or negative development?". If you review your restatement, you will see that you did not give a brief explanation of why the tourism industry is being heavily promoted in developing countries. You also did not choose a single opinion to defend as a part of this single opinion essay. You cannot use the comparative discussion format because that is not the writing guide question that was provided to you. Therefore, the reasoning paragraphs of your essay are also incorrect. So it will not be possible for this essay to get a passing score since it did not meet the scoring requirements based on the guide questions.
There are 2 guide questions that need to be responded to in the first paragraph if you are to receive full scoring consideration rather than point deductions in the Task Accuracy preliminary scoring section. You need to properly respond to "Why is this the case" and "Is this a positive or negative development?". If you review your restatement, you will see that you did not give a brief explanation of why the tourism industry is being heavily promoted in developing countries. You also did not choose a single opinion to defend as a part of this single opinion essay. You cannot use the comparative discussion format because that is not the writing guide question that was provided to you. Therefore, the reasoning paragraphs of your essay are also incorrect. So it will not be possible for this essay to get a passing score since it did not meet the scoring requirements based on the guide questions.