Holt Educational Consultant
Nov 16, 2017
Graduate / My goal is researching in the area of demanding automotive sector using machine learning techniques [4]
@bs900004 you have written a motivation letter / personal statement instead of a statement of purpose. Set this aside for use under a more appropriate essay requirement. This is well written and will serve as a very good motivation letter, with edits, when required. As of now, you will have to develop a new essay that will better reflect the requirements of a statement of purpose. Think of the statement of purpose as an extended version of the motivation letter, only with a different focus.
The statement of purpose should represent your academic and professional training that will help you to advance as a student in this course. Proving that you have the background in relation to the masters course is only the first requirement of this essay. So make sure that you dazzle the reviewer with your academic accomplishments and professional abilities. Both of which should combine to prove that you will be more than capable student when enrolled in the course.
Make sure that your professional presentation will help you better illustrate the purpose of your interest in this course. Talk about your line of work and what frustrates you about it. Or maybe, what you want to improve in the performance of these tasks. Explain how you see yourself making a difference in the workplace in about 5 years based upon what you learn from this course. Set out your career goals in a manner that shows how the course will help you gain an edge within the profession or in your office in the future.
Assure the reviewer that you have done careful research regarding your university choices. Enlighten him about what you feel sets this course, taught at this university, apart from the others. What do you think makes this university special? Consider the opportunities available to the graduate students in the discussion in order to prove your points regarding the development of your theoretical and practical skills in this field.
Close by assuring the reviewer that you are enthused about attending this university during the upcoming semester and that you are confident that based upon your presentation, you are a more than qualified candidate for an available graduate student slot.
@bs900004 you have written a motivation letter / personal statement instead of a statement of purpose. Set this aside for use under a more appropriate essay requirement. This is well written and will serve as a very good motivation letter, with edits, when required. As of now, you will have to develop a new essay that will better reflect the requirements of a statement of purpose. Think of the statement of purpose as an extended version of the motivation letter, only with a different focus.
The statement of purpose should represent your academic and professional training that will help you to advance as a student in this course. Proving that you have the background in relation to the masters course is only the first requirement of this essay. So make sure that you dazzle the reviewer with your academic accomplishments and professional abilities. Both of which should combine to prove that you will be more than capable student when enrolled in the course.
Make sure that your professional presentation will help you better illustrate the purpose of your interest in this course. Talk about your line of work and what frustrates you about it. Or maybe, what you want to improve in the performance of these tasks. Explain how you see yourself making a difference in the workplace in about 5 years based upon what you learn from this course. Set out your career goals in a manner that shows how the course will help you gain an edge within the profession or in your office in the future.
Assure the reviewer that you have done careful research regarding your university choices. Enlighten him about what you feel sets this course, taught at this university, apart from the others. What do you think makes this university special? Consider the opportunities available to the graduate students in the discussion in order to prove your points regarding the development of your theoretical and practical skills in this field.
Close by assuring the reviewer that you are enthused about attending this university during the upcoming semester and that you are confident that based upon your presentation, you are a more than qualified candidate for an available graduate student slot.