Holt Educational Consultant
Nov 6, 2017
Scholarship / These courses will help me to move the tech-community in Pakistan a step closer towards digitization [5]
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You know what? Your essay will be a lot stronger if you don't use our opening and closing paragraphs. Just let the university choices and course information speak for you. You did an excellent job of integrating your academic and professional experiences within each of the course choices you made. The presentation that you used made the opening and closing sentences redundant and not really impressive anymore. So you can remove those parts and just keep the current course outline presentation in its place. Please be conscious of the fact that redundancies are frowned upon in a Chevening essay so, since you already mentioned information from your long term career goals in your post study essay, it would be best to remove that reference in this essay. Avoid redundancies at all costs. It isn't going to help your essay to repeat information to the reviewer when you were already cautioned about that in the prompt requirements.