Holt Educational Consultant
Oct 29, 2017
Scholarship / I have been exposed to both office and field challenges - skills proving for Chevening [4]
Njoku, are you writing a project proposal or a summary of your previous design work? You are not trying to win over a client in this instance. You are trying to win a scholarship. Summarize your presentation of the project because it is too lengthy and does not really show any leadership potential on your part. It only shows that you have excellent imagination skills. Someone in your position should be able to justify a leadership skill simply by presenting your ability to delegate and oversee the project as the problems in construction arise. The problems are not limited to the physical project but also includes your people management skills. Show more evidence of your people management skills so that you will have a chance to present your ability to influence people in the same instance. The influencing side is severely lacking in your essay. Shorten the project description to one paragraph if you feel the necessity to include it. With only 500 words though, you should be careful of the information you present. In this instance, you used too much of the word count on a non-essential discussion and lost the allowance for the influencing discussion.
Njoku, are you writing a project proposal or a summary of your previous design work? You are not trying to win over a client in this instance. You are trying to win a scholarship. Summarize your presentation of the project because it is too lengthy and does not really show any leadership potential on your part. It only shows that you have excellent imagination skills. Someone in your position should be able to justify a leadership skill simply by presenting your ability to delegate and oversee the project as the problems in construction arise. The problems are not limited to the physical project but also includes your people management skills. Show more evidence of your people management skills so that you will have a chance to present your ability to influence people in the same instance. The influencing side is severely lacking in your essay. Shorten the project description to one paragraph if you feel the necessity to include it. With only 500 words though, you should be careful of the information you present. In this instance, you used too much of the word count on a non-essential discussion and lost the allowance for the influencing discussion.