Holt Educational Consultant
Oct 27, 2017
Scholarship / STUDYING IN THE UK - Chevening: motivations to make marketing sustainable [3]
Angela, your second paragraph is too short and does not really help to enhance the information you are presenting about your background in the essay. So you can remove that part and just use the 3rd paragraph as the second paragraph of the essay. Now, are for the reference to your future career paths. your first and third university choices show how you plan to use the courses in the future. However, your second choice doesn't indicate how this opportunity you might be given will help to open a career path for your in the future. Additionally, you should remove the reference to your undergraduate degree in this section. You should discuss your academic foundation as it applies to all of the courses you have chosen, not just this particular course. The reason is simple. You must provide concrete proof that your academic background has given you the foundation to succeed as a masters student, regardless of which course you are sponsored by Chevening for.
Angela, your second paragraph is too short and does not really help to enhance the information you are presenting about your background in the essay. So you can remove that part and just use the 3rd paragraph as the second paragraph of the essay. Now, are for the reference to your future career paths. your first and third university choices show how you plan to use the courses in the future. However, your second choice doesn't indicate how this opportunity you might be given will help to open a career path for your in the future. Additionally, you should remove the reference to your undergraduate degree in this section. You should discuss your academic foundation as it applies to all of the courses you have chosen, not just this particular course. The reason is simple. You must provide concrete proof that your academic background has given you the foundation to succeed as a masters student, regardless of which course you are sponsored by Chevening for.