Holt Educational Consultant
Oct 27, 2017
Scholarship / Learning and gaining experience participating in various British courses [6]
Adil, this is a strong presentation of your course choices. While I feel that the future use per course in your career should be more developed, as the prompt does ask you to specify how each course will help you enhance you future career, you did do a summary presentation as an overall career objective so that is acceptable. I makes the essay unique and interesting in a way. The location of the two universities are not really relevant to the reasons why you chose these universities though and can be omitted in the presentation. If you have academic awards and accolades from your college days, that could further enhance your ability to complete any of these courses that you have chosen. Your academic profile can use some building up. After all, your professional discussion is one of the strong points of your essay.
Adil, this is a strong presentation of your course choices. While I feel that the future use per course in your career should be more developed, as the prompt does ask you to specify how each course will help you enhance you future career, you did do a summary presentation as an overall career objective so that is acceptable. I makes the essay unique and interesting in a way. The location of the two universities are not really relevant to the reasons why you chose these universities though and can be omitted in the presentation. If you have academic awards and accolades from your college days, that could further enhance your ability to complete any of these courses that you have chosen. Your academic profile can use some building up. After all, your professional discussion is one of the strong points of your essay.